What an awesome beginning. I have to admit, I had never expected that. Lisa, it's so hard to read your short stories, because I know any minute, it's going to end, and that will be that. I love short stories, but damnit, I always want to hear more! aarg!

Interestingly enough, for sci-fi, it's pretty damn believable. Which is perhaps what makes great scifi great.

As always, I'm enjoying it. I wish I could offer you something less vague, more useful, but there it is. It's a sweet lovely gem. Perhaps it will be set into a crown someday?

Looking forward to reading your work as always my dear!