I've just been cleaning out adverbs and bad being verbs so when I saw your post I checked the chapter I've been working on again. Here's the one that I will never, ever cut: "absently"
Otherwise, the rest of my pretties lie curled on the cutting room floor *sniff*
My writing teacher hates adverbs Says adjectives are stronger, Nouns and verbs stronger still. [...] But I'm almost. Almost a mother, almost thirty, Almost a writer, almost myself, Almost your lover.
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Date: 2008-10-13 09:57 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-14 12:01 am (UTC)Otherwise, the rest of my pretties lie curled on the cutting room floor *sniff*
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Date: 2008-10-14 02:41 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-14 02:47 am (UTC)My writing teacher hates adverbs
Says adjectives are stronger,
Nouns and verbs stronger still. [...]
But I'm almost.
Almost a mother, almost thirty,
Almost a writer, almost myself,
Almost your lover.
I don't remember the rest. It was pretty bad. :-)