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You can have my adverbs when you pry them from my cold, dead fingers..... aaarghh!...

::dies::

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Date: 2008-10-13 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] towersofgrey.livejournal.com
Hell. yes. I feel the exactly the same way about my descriptions. I will trim them, but if they go, I go.

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Date: 2008-10-14 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] julia-reynolds.livejournal.com
I've just been cleaning out adverbs and bad being verbs so when I saw your post I checked the chapter I've been working on again. Here's the one that I will never, ever cut: "absently"

Otherwise, the rest of my pretties lie curled on the cutting room floor *sniff*

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Date: 2008-10-14 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] serenejournal.livejournal.com
This makes me want to quote my (quite awful, really) poem at you. It's titled "Almost". I'll see if I can dredge it up.

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Date: 2008-10-14 02:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] serenejournal.livejournal.com
Hmm. Nope. Must be lost. Goes something like:

My writing teacher hates adverbs
Says adjectives are stronger,
Nouns and verbs stronger still. [...]
But I'm almost.
Almost a mother, almost thirty,
Almost a writer, almost myself,
Almost your lover.

I don't remember the rest. It was pretty bad. :-)

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