Betty flops again
Mar. 9th, 2009 11:28 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ljgeoffThat was quick! Betty got rejected by Side Shows 2, but at least they sent me some feedback. I worked her over some and sent her off to Lady Churchill's Rosebud Wristlet.
I added about 300 words, and they were necessary words. Plumped out Betty's character, made the kid Dorothy a little creepier and gave the ending more impact. Still haven't heard back from Coyote Wild; Black Holes says that it should be another month or so (the steampunk ghost-hunter faery story).
Luke, the dog and three cats are in bed with me. I might need to go sleep on the couch.
Edit: Well, damn. Just found out that Coyote Wild is on hiatus. "If you placed a story with us it's released." So, now to look for another market for Oh My Heart, Oh My Soul.
I added about 300 words, and they were necessary words. Plumped out Betty's character, made the kid Dorothy a little creepier and gave the ending more impact. Still haven't heard back from Coyote Wild; Black Holes says that it should be another month or so (the steampunk ghost-hunter faery story).
Luke, the dog and three cats are in bed with me. I might need to go sleep on the couch.
Edit: Well, damn. Just found out that Coyote Wild is on hiatus. "If you placed a story with us it's released." So, now to look for another market for Oh My Heart, Oh My Soul.
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Date: 2009-03-10 07:58 pm (UTC)