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ljgeoffI'm just about done with the first chapter of the non-fiction that I'm working on. The chapter is going to land at around 3K just short of 3.7K. I know that boxofdelights said she'd take a look at it -- anybody else interested? At this point, I'm looking for critique on style and structure -- not so much typos and spelling errors. I want to know if the narrative grabs you, if you'd keep reading. I want to know if the structure of the chapter is off-putting.
Just chime in and I'll send you an invite to the google drive page.
boxofdelights said she'd take a look at it -- anybody else interested? At this point, I'm looking for critique on style and structure -- not so much typos and spelling errors. I want to know if the narrative grabs you, if you'd keep reading. I want to know if the structure of the chapter is off-putting. Just chime in and I'll send you an invite to the google drive page.